As I looked over at Emma I felt such rage,my fists got all sweaty and hot as I started clenching them.I felt like tearing her to bits,I started shouting really loudly,my face went red and my head got very hot.I started to stomp my feet and flare my nostrils.My stomach was sucking in and out,I gritted my teeth fiercely as though i was a lion and was about to charge at something,my eyebrows furrowed incredibly fast.
By Rachael
What a great piece of descriptive writing Rachael, I hope I never have to experience this anger at home.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great piece of descriptive writing Rachael, I hope you never get that angry at home.
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